[scrapped] wrong floor,assembly cut, abandoned

I dont believe the piece will work as a completed film, Though each scene was solid on its own, togethery they did not make a film to my satisfion. I have been releasing each scene alone instead, here is the longer cut the logical inconsistencies are due from me writing and rewriting this many times after scenes were done, If I were going to finisgh this I would go back and fix all the logical weirdness\r
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Some people might have noticed I did not post wrong floor during the saxxies. Here is the story with that, about three months ago I did an edit of everything I had done on wrong floor, Though each scene alone was good, the whole thing cut together was very disjointed. This can be attributed to the f that the project was my learner project for SFM, and wasnt following much of a script for a while. Since the project was not to my satisfion when cut together, and already outside the time limit for the saxxies, I decided to turf it for now. I dont know if I will return to it, this is unlikely , as I feel I can make a more compelling film from scratch than to finish this project. Ill definately do more portal 2 and pboyd/atlas stuff, but it wont be wrong floor. Im posting up the bad cut that I used that decision here. this cut here is unfinished and lacks a lot.