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00:00 some f***ing appalling mistakes.

00:02 Some absolute dog shit.

00:04 Whitechapel is not an Indigenous Australian.

00:06 Three of you did that.

00:08 Seven Stages was not written during the LA riots.

00:12 It's written in Australia in the mid-90s.

00:15 20 years after the LA riots.

00:17 Diangla is not writing about the struggles of First Nations Australians,

00:20 as some of you have twice.

00:22 He's not writing about Indigenous Americans.

00:25 Do you know who Indigenous Americans are?

00:27 Is Whitechapel a f***ing Indigenous American?

00:31 I'm not joking!

00:33 No, First Nations people in America are Native American Indians.

00:37 They're not African Americans!

00:41 African!

00:43 It's the first part!

00:45 They are not native to America, as some of you tried to point out.

00:49 Sort that shit out. That sucks. Get rid of that.

00:51 That f***s up your essay so bad.

00:53 General statements. Most of them are shit.

00:55 I'm going to show you some good ones in a minute.

00:57 They're so f***ing shit. They're so valid.

00:59 I nearly killed myself as I was reading these.

01:01 We're going to sort them out.

01:03 Start men strong.

01:05 If your essay starts crap,

01:07 guess how I'm going to feel about it as I'm reading it.

01:09 It's exactly how I'm going to feel.

01:13 If you score a 7 or a 5,

01:15 your structures are all over the place.

01:17 These are not optional for you.

01:19 You have to be following these.

01:21 Some of you might have been peeing until you actually wrote good essays

01:23 This is maybe not so much for you.

01:25 But generally if you finished your essay and you're scoring below 35,

01:27 you've got to be doing these things.

01:29 These are your opportunities to compare

01:31 and some of you aren't doing that right now.

01:33 Some of you don't know the quotations.

01:35 It's so f***ing obvious.

01:37 You're quoting just like, shit.

01:39 Some of you are quoting characters' names.

01:41 Sort it out. Learn your flashcards.

01:43 I can't learn them for you.

01:45 If that's you, and it's a few of you,

01:47 let me tell you, if you don't know your flashcards,

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