So here is the original. There are some parts I liked, but the reason I re-did this ep is because it felt drawn out (no pun intended, haha) basically I felt there were too many lulls and not enough lols!
I also wanted to build the widowmine character more, help show more of its personality, where as this one, the widowmine is hidden the whole time.

in summary: Basically I felt the episode was a missed opportunity for some funny and character defining stuff